+ Divine Beauty +

Ah, I can't use the critique system because of my lack of subscription, so I'll just critique you here. Mkay, I'm going to be very critical since you asked for it. First off, The shading is off, the hair closest to her neck (behind it) should be the darkest because there are more shadows there, look at real peoples hair to see what they look like so you can get a better sense of what they look like. Second, shading on the clothes is a little off, same deal as the hair, try and make the shadows a bit more realistic so it has more of a 3D/Real feel. Third, the wrinkles in the clothes have gotten better, but they still aren't very "flowy". For example, the pleated skirt and the pieces of cloth below it, the should be draped and "lighter" if that makes any sense. Like I've said before, I would get books on clothes, look at real people and things like that. Lastly, the anatomy. Your anatomy has improved greatly since the last time I commented on it. Though, it is still slightly disproportional. The proportion between the head and shoulders is a little skewed (The head is slightly large). Also, the shoulders are a little rounded, female shoulders yes, do curve down but they are not always that sloped and the arms; the arms are a little short, but it's not that noticeable. Overall, with your color choices and background it looks nice. You've greatly improved. I especially like how you did the background and the fact that you inserted a little kitten into the drawing! It's so cute! Great job!